Monday, November 3, 2008

community poem

City streets, music beats,
restaurants, busy shops.
All around down town
people go to walk around.

Office buildings,
where adults go to work.
Quite neighborhoods,
where kids run and play,
schools and parks
where they spend their day,

This is my community
although it's small
it's filled with many opportunities.
I've live in Dearborn all my life. It's a pretty small city but their's a lot to do if you're willing to go out and explore the city. It's a pretty safe place to be. In my neighborhood their are a lot of little kids and their always playing outside, but you usually don't ever see anyone else outside. I like living in Dearborn and I'm pretty content here.

3 comments:

ms.sun rays said...

Wow you got your poem to rhyme, I think that's really hard. Your community sounds interesting and fun. I like being around people and it sounds like you do too.

JP said...

IYou should rap with your rhymes, lol, this was wonderful I think I would like your community it seems like a place that is tight in the sense that it has a sense of togetherness if you will. All in all I loved it.

alli☼ said...

Your poem really flows well and I like the rhyme pattern. Dearborn sounds kind of like Taylor in a way. Every one sounds very friendly and it seems like they enjoy living there.